1.The headline of the article. The old one is"1995 BREAK UP THE SALES WEEK RECORD SINCE 2003". It's really hard for readers know what the article is about in a jerk. So Sally advised me to change it into something can relate to my background with snow. At last we decide create the headline with a subhead"I MAY BE ICE COOL BUT MY NEW ALBUM IS REALLY HOT!--my second album smashed the record books! I think this headline is very individuation, so it not only can help me attract the readers but also let them know the theme of the texts.
2.Make my layout more professional:
*Using warp text, make texts warp around the image
*Adding a small image at the bottom.
*Creating a sentence and put it in the middle of the texts.
*Adding something like a tips with something can make the
readers look forward to it.
3.Reason why delete the snowman: It's not really relate to my double page although the effect of the background is snowy. But it's just my opinion.
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